K, so ... I was going through my litto "Hello Kitty" binder (don't judge), which is where i keep all my poems and songs and stuff and realized, i've been quite talented for a while .. haha ! Like, alot are from 2006 and 2007 when i was like, 16 & 17 ... Sometimes i look back at them and laugh ... sometimes i look back at them and say "Did i seriously write this?" . but when inspiration hits ... it hits ! So yeah, i guess i'll share some old stuff . I love hearing feedback from people when it comes to my writing . whether its good or bad ... i like to reflect on it. Doesn't mean imma change the way i write, cause the way i write IS me and i won't be changing ME for anyone ... but ... at lease i can get tips and ideas that i could prolly try and incorporate in my writing . So, be honest .. tell me what you think ....
"When I'm Gone" (2006)
When I'm gone will you cherish all the moments that we spent together,
Though it all i can't forget because memories last forever.
We tried to hold on through all these years,
But all of out disagreements brought us to tears.
From here on out we;re on our own,
What's next to come is still unknown.
Being that this is so hard to do,
I want you to know i still care for you.
In my mind will remain your face,
From my memory it will never erase.
"Excuses" (2007)
I hope you can't sleep at night,
Knowing that I'll never be alright.
Because of you I'm crying,
Because of you I'm dying.
I trusted you, I gave my all,
But now you stand there as i fall.
Why did you walk into my life,
And walk right out, that wasn't right ...
I don't wanna hear (nope)
I don't wanna hear, excuses.
They won't heal my heart (nope)
They won't heal my heart, they're useless.
I was so young, I was naive,
The things you said i would believe.
You said i made you happy,
You said you needed me.
I let you go but didn't see,
That once I did you weren't coming back to.
I don't wanna hear (nope)
I don't wanna hear, excuses.
They won't heal my heart (nope)
They won't heal my heart, they're useless.
"Hope. Faith. Love." (2008)
Through the worries, through the rain,
Through the struggles, and through the pain.
I've come to learn that life IS worth living.
Through the smiles, through the laughs,
Through the present, and through the past.
I've come to learn that life IS worth living.
A little bit of hope, a little bit of faith, a little bit of love,
Is all you need to make it through the day.
No need to question God above, just remember all you need
is Hope. Faith. and Love.
No matter the situation or how hard you may fall,
Just believe and you will see, you will get through it all.
[Love] the world like God loves you, have some [Faith] in all you do,
Just be [Hopeful] and your dreams will ALL come true!
"Victory" (2008)
In the midst of all the crying, in the midst of all the pain,
I'll guarantee a smile if you simply call his name.
No one can heal you faster, no one can bring the light,
The one that'll take the darkness so that you will be alright.
Declare it with me, I've got the victory,
Nothing in this world can take this joy away from me!
12/9/09
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We all feel pain my friend. Hurting people hurt people, but thankfully the world still has people like you. have a wonderful day Ashley:)
ReplyDelete,Casey